reynoldswriting.com Blog http://reynoldswriting.com/blog All Things Writing and Marketing Mon, 14 May 2012 14:16:56 +0000 en hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 Revitalizing Your Blog http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/05/14/revitalizing-your-blog/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/05/14/revitalizing-your-blog/#comments Mon, 14 May 2012 14:16:56 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=636 The ProBlogger website recently posted a fascinating article by guest blogger Ryan Barton entitled 9 Steps to Take When You Loathe Your Own Blog. While I have to admit that I’m not at the loathing stage yet, I still found the information highly illuminating. Barton discusses issues that plague all bloggers from time — a sense of stagnation, a lack of fresh content or new ideas, that nagging feel of obligation as opposed to inspiration. It’s all too easy to start viewing a regular blog as a chore instead of an opportunity. I’ve had my moments where the thought suddenly hit me: “Oh crap, it’s already time to blog again?” And I do this stuff for a living, so I can only imagine how intimidating that thought must be to a non-writer or occasional writer.

One theme Barton emphasizes in his post is the need to change things up, from trying a new writing venue or posting schedule to varying your blog-reading habits to get a fresh perspective on things. In my (biased) opinion, this in one of the biggest advantages of hiring a ghost-blogger. Adding that extra brain to the think tank automatically helps generate new, unusual, mold-breaking ideas and topics. Hiring a generalist instead of a specialist in your industry is even better, because you’re getting the outsider’s point of view.

Another suggestion of Bryan’s is to re-focus on your target audience. If you’re trying to reach everybody, your blog can get watered down to the point that it no longer reaches anybody. Who is your ideal reader, and how specifically can you envision that person in your mind? We marketing folks use terms such as “target market” or “demographic,” but target markets and demographics don’t read articles — people do. Not groups of people clustered around a monitor, either, but individuals. The more clearly you can aim your writing at a specific person, the easier it is to ask yourself, “What kind of article would really benefit John Doe right about now?” Talking to an individual is always easier than figuring out what kind of speech to give to a crowd, so put the image of a specific reader in your mind and see if this approach greases the wheels on your personal blogging engine — or on any other writing project, for that matter.

Hey, you know what? I enjoyed writing this article. I bet Barton enjoyed writing his, too. Now go enjoy writing yours!

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Creating Your Audience through Content Marketing http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/04/30/creating-your-audience-through-content-marketing/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/04/30/creating-your-audience-through-content-marketing/#comments Mon, 30 Apr 2012 14:33:31 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=630 As Steve Jobs famously said, “people don’t know what they want until you show it to them.” In other words, it’s up to you to create the demand for a product or service by introducing it to your target audience within the larger context of how this product or service can enhance their lives. Brian Clark of Copyblogger recently wrote an article for Forbes illustrating this idea through the example of Procter & Gamble. The soap company (and that’s pretty much all it was, back in the 1930s) needed a way to present its products to a specific audience — housewives. The answer? A new form of entertainment called the soap opera.

Daytime drama reached into millions of households via radio and eventually television, giving the lady of the house a daily feast of “stories” accompanied by, of course, commercials for detergent products. If you spent your afternoon doing the laundry, chances were you were also caught up in the latest brain tumor diagnosis, adulterous affair or discovery of an evil twin. And every few minutes, you’d hear about how and why a particular detergent got the job better than Brand X, more often than not from the characters themselves. If your favorite radio or TV character was singing the praises of a new dandruff shampoo day in and day out, eventually you’d want to buy some just to see what all the fuss is about. Procter & Gamble had become more than a product manufacturer — it was now a media producer.

This same approach is alive and well today. We call it content marketing — advertising combined with other information that a specific audience genuinely needs or enjoys. An effective modern marketing campaign might achieve this in the form of drip marketing, a series of direct-mail or email “touches” that collectively build the reader’s trust until the urge to buy or at least contact you becomes overpowering. And just as soap opera audiences come to think of the characters they see as living, breathing people, your target market comes to rely on your brand as the real deal.

Blogging can prove especially valuable for selling your expertise to an audience. Say you’re a tax attorney trying to establish your credibility and convert prospects. By posting authoritative, genuinely helpful articles on a wide range of topics related to taxes, the people searching for that information online — who obviously need and want such information — start turning to you first as their own personal guru on the subject. And when it’s time to get their taxes done, who do you think they’re going to call? That’s content marketing.

Now it’s your turn to create your own business’s media channels. Drive demand and build your own buzz through the power of content marketing. Who knows? You just might become the hottest show in town.

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Writing and Rest: A Productive Combination http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/04/16/writing-and-rest-a-productive-combination/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/04/16/writing-and-rest-a-productive-combination/#comments Mon, 16 Apr 2012 14:47:40 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=626 I like to sleep. Unfortunately I also like making money, and a freelance writer earns money for writing, not for napping. But a strategic approach to sleep and/or rest can make a big difference in how well you use your time, whether you write for a living or operate most any other kind of business. Here are a few tips that I’ve found helpful:

Find your rhythm. Everyone’s body clock has a built-in “siesta time” — a period of day or night when your brain seems to slow down and creative inspiration must give way to sheer technique and stubbornness. A skilled writer can keep slogging away during these hours, but the slower pace devalues that billable time. Personally, writing comes more easily to me in the mornings and evenings, so I try to reserve afternoons for more mundane business practices. If you can adapt your daily schedule to match your peak performance windows, I highly recommend doing so.

Sleep on it before you start. I find it challenging to launch right into a new project, especially if I’ve never written anything for that client before. Even if I’ve just concluded a phone interview and have all my other informational ducks in a row, my mind still needs some time to absorb the data before working with it. If this describes you too, I recommend going over all your background info before bedtime and then letting your subconscious sort it out as you sleep. Chances are that you’ll wake up in the morning feeling prepared and ready to write — in fact, your grey matter may have already gotten a head start (if you’ll pardon the expression) on the writing.

Sleep on it before you submit. So you’re up against a deadline and you need to shoot that draft off to the client ASAP. We’ve all been there, but I would urge you to stop, spend some time away from the draft, and then take a second look at it before hitting “Send.” Ideally, you might have time for some actual shut-eye to clear your head. But even if you’re really up against the clock, you can still take a walk around the block, return some phone calls, watch a few minutes of mindless TV — anything to distract your mind from the job at hand. You can then review it with fresh eyes and catch any little rough spots before passing it on.

Do all that other stuff everyone says to do. You know what I’m talking about — eating a balanced diet, getting some sort of daily exercise, drinking plenty of water, sleeping regular hours and so on. I know that I get so fixed on what I’m doing that I go into a kind of hypnotic trance, with mealtimes or bedtimes becoming abstract concepts instead of rules. How many other freelancers and business owners out there are guilty of the same failing? If you’re a one-person shop, then it only takes one sick or fatigued worker to shut the entire shop down. For freelancers who subsist mainly on active income streams, no production means no money. So keep the machine well-oiled and give it the occasional rest.

Sleep tight!

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How Copywriting Can Use (or Rebut) Complaints http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/04/02/how-copywriting-can-use-or-rebut-complaints/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/04/02/how-copywriting-can-use-or-rebut-complaints/#comments Mon, 02 Apr 2012 14:30:45 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=623 Does complaining have a place in marketing? Sure it does! In fact, complaining about some problem or other is a time-honored tradition, especially in your pain statement. (“You scrubbed those dishes till your hands were raw and the plates are still filthy. Don’t you wish there was a dishwashing liquid that really made things easier?”) But as with most copywriting techniques, there’s a right way and wrong way to go about it.

Consider the technique, so popular in the world of politics, of tearing down the other guy. If you want to position yourself as better than competition, go right ahead — but I wouldn’t build a whole campaign around it. Your audience might wonder if you feel insecure about Brand X because you spend so much time slamming it. The reader of your ad may ask,”Why doesn’t this brand talk about its own positive qualities more?” Even your pain statement can work against you if you hammer away at it like Debbie Downer. Present the problem, yes, but then leap into the solution in time to salvage the reader’s mood and get them excited about the solution — you.

I’ve mentioned previously that the occasional rant can add a little spice to your blog among the many other kinds of articles you post there. But tread carefully. Just as too much spice can ruin a meal, too much ranting can ruin your online presence. Negativity in large doses will simply drive readers away. I follow a certain well-known copywriter’s blog less frequently than I once did for this very reason — I got tired of reading complaints about this or that bad experience with a client, how the industry isn’t what it used to be, etc. If a blog can be said to take on a persona, this one had become a cranky old fart. Don’t you do the same, unless your business expressly caters to the “You kids get off my lawn” crowd.

What about replies to complaints? Perhaps your business has a listing on a local-search directory for products and services. If so, hopefully your listing collects rave reviews from satisfied customers — but the occasional furious accusation or criticism, whether true or false, can go a long way toward wiping out your good reputation. The urge to post an equally vicious rebuttal may seem natural. Don’t do it! Instead of descending to the level of the complaining post, to take some time to cool off and devise a rational, polite, professional-sounding response. If you can’t manage to do that in a timely manner, hire a copywriter to do it for you. I’ve actually written several such rebuttals in the past for business owners who didn’t trust themselves to respond in the right tone.

Too much negative verbiage in a marketing piece is like too much negative space in a painting — in both cases, you come away with nothing.

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The Power of “What’s in It for Me?” http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/03/19/the-power-of-whats-in-it-for-me/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/03/19/the-power-of-whats-in-it-for-me/#comments Mon, 19 Mar 2012 14:35:08 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=619 I don’t have the world’s longest attention span. Sure, there are times when I can get thoroughly lost in what I’m doing. For example, in my youth I spent many hours patiently building model airplanes, although the fumes from the glue may have contributed to my methodical pace. When I receive a direct-mail piece or an email blast, however, I tend to skim over the veneer of cleverness and the endless lists of what a product does or how many years the company has served Satisfied Customers Just Like Me. I cut to the chase — and as far as I’m concerned, the chase ends with the answer to one simple question: “What’s in it for me?”

I’ve rewritten countless websites and print marketing campaigns in which the client had simply taken too long to get to that crucial question, or in some cases had never gotten to it at all amidst the personal trumpet blowing and back patting. Of course your reputation for quality matters. And yes, you DO have to explain who you are and what you do sooner or later. But that’s not what we prospective buyers are really looking for. We’re interested in how you will improve our lives by solving a specific problem, and the longer you take to get around to that little detail, the less chance you have of avoiding a one-way trip to the circular file.

You’ve heard it a million times: Push the benefits, not the features. While I wouldn’t suggest dumping the features, I would recommend leap-frogging the benefits into a prominent position so they can grab your audience’s attention from the git-go. One simple way to do this is by playing the “What If” game — an arresting opening statement that dares us to dream: “What if you could guarantee your family’s financial security for life, starting today?” “Imagine getting the best night’s sleep you ever had — every night!” Determine what your ideal clients’ ideal outcome would be, get them excited by making them envision that ideal outcome, and then offer it to them on a silver platter.

If you feel the need to paint an even clearer picture for your prospects or remind them of the problem at hand, you can lead off with a pain statement. If you offer a more efficient lawn mower, make your reader picture another hot, horrible summer battling that broken-down behemoth in the garage and laying out money for frequent repairs. Then flip the emotional state with a “What If” that describes the fast, effortless mowing experience possible with your super-reliable new MegaCut 3000. Our hero!

Whatever approach you use, make those benefits leap off the page so your readers don’t have to search for them. If you need a reminder, hang a picture of a typical customer over your computer monitor with a caption reading, “WHAT’S IN IT FOR ME?” If your answer to that question is compelling enough, we will keep reading — and buying.

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Beyond SEO: Written Content as a Retention Tool http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/03/04/beyond-seo-written-content-as-a-retention-tool/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/03/04/beyond-seo-written-content-as-a-retention-tool/#comments Mon, 05 Mar 2012 05:03:26 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=616 Imagine that you’re in hot pursuit of the ultimate vacation spot. And you’re in luck, because for the past fifty miles you’ve driven past a succession of billboards proclaiming “ULTIMATE VACATION SPOT” with instructions on how to get there. You speed down the highway until you arrive at your destination, only to find a nondescript patch of ground and a little sign reading “Ultimate Vacation Spot.” There’s no explanation of what’s so ultimate about it, or at least nothing that convinces you that you’ve actually come to the right place. So you wearily get back into your car and continue your search.

Is your website that dry patch of land?

Many business owners feel that SEO is everything. Web optimization companies regularly promise to “put you on page 1 of Google” in a specific amount of time for a specific fee, and no doubt some of them make good on their promises. Well, every company wants to show up on top of a Google search, right? So businesses pour their online marketing budgets into “getting found” — without putting any thought into what happens once they do get found.

SEO brings visitors to your site, but it can’t make them stay there. Keywords direct, but they cannot persuade. If you put all your marketing efforts into guiding people toward your site and none toward the content they read when they arrive, you’re essentially sending them to a dry patch of land when they’re expecting to encounter the Ultimate Vacation Site or whatever else you promised them. The second they reach your site, the content there must make them pause, absorb the information, and feel that they’ve arrived at the right place, or they won’t end up buying from you or contacting you for more details.

“Oh, but my website is just there for informational purposes.” Well, that’s fine, but even an “information only” site still has a job to do. The information had better compel attention and inspire trust (in you, your company, your products, etc.) instead of just expounding dry data, or no one will bother to read very much of it or take you very seriously as a resource.

Now, it’s true that organic SEO — keywords integrated into your written content — can make a difference in helping people find your site, but it’s not a be-all and end-all. Good writing tends to optimize itself anyway, while a bunch of awkwardly-strung keywords won’t exactly keep your visitors enthralled. If you want to retain the viewers you draw in, make sure your web content is worth the trip. Remember, another site is always just a mouse click away.

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Smart Outsourcing: Getting Full Value from Your Freelance Copywriter http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/02/19/smart-outsourcing-getting-full-value-from-your-freelance-copywriter/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/02/19/smart-outsourcing-getting-full-value-from-your-freelance-copywriter/#comments Mon, 20 Feb 2012 04:55:59 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=607 Once upon a time I received a bid request from a business owner in need of website content. I suggested my Small Website Package as the most cost-efficient and time-efficient way of making that happen. I heard nothing back from the business owner for some time. When I finally inquired, she told me that she had been roughing out a draft herself, figuring that she could save money by simply letting me edit it.

No such luck. The content I received was so rough that it took me many hours of editing to get it into acceptable shape — more hours, in fact, than writing it from scratch would have taken. As a result, my client ended up paying more for editing than she would have paid for the full writing package. And that doesn’t even include all the valuable billable time she dumped into that rough draft!

I bring this up because an increasing number of business owners have discovered the power of outsourcing, thanks in part to Timothy Ferriss’s popular book on the subject, The 4-Hour Workweek. Ferriss has carved out a remarkably efficient life for himself by outsourcing time-consuming daily activities to third parties. It makes perfect sense — hand over a time-consuming/tedious/specialized job (such as copywriting) over to someone who can do it really well and fairly quickly (such as a professional copywriter). (And I mean a real pro, by the way, not some $2-an-hour hack, because you’ll just end up hiring the pro to fix the hack’s initial efforts anyway.) By having that third party work while you do other things, you’re free to focus your own energies on money-making activities.

But like so many other things in life, outsourcing only works if you work it. The client I mentioned didn’t save herself any time or money because she did most of the heavy lifting and then outsourced it to be fixed. Yes, there are times when editing is all a client needs. If the draft’s already done and reasonably competent, then a revision can get it to the finish line quickly and affordably. But if you’re starting from scratch, take advantage of your copywriter’s willingness to take the whole thing off your plate. You’ll breathe easier, you can go back to doing what you do best, and you’ll be getting more for your money. That’s smart outsourcing!

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Being There: Advertising as Brand Reinforcement http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/02/05/being-there-advertising-as-brand-reinforcement/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/02/05/being-there-advertising-as-brand-reinforcement/#comments Mon, 06 Feb 2012 04:12:49 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=601 Overheard: Two middle-aged ladies in a grocery store.

LADY 1: We need to hurry. The game is already on.
LADY 2: That’s right. I want to make sure I see all the commercials!

Even to the most sports-unaware eavesdropper, that odd interchange can mean only one thing: Super Sunday. Only the Super Bowl could keep millions of Americans glued to their living room sofas for a parade of commercials. Well, there’s a game going on too, I guess (at least on some years). But game or no game, people can’t wait to see what entertaining, bizarre, or crazy-expensive ads await them, especially during halftime.

What a waste of money, right? Leading brands shell out millions of dollars just for a few seconds of visibility, and most of the spots aired are too busy being cute to actually pitch anything. It’s just brand reinforcement. Why would Coke or Pepsi blow that kind of money just to remind us that they exist (and can put together a really nice TV spot)? Wouldn’t that amount of money be better spent on other things?

Pepsi thought so last year. The company made headlines by snubbing Super Bowl XLV and diverting those marketing dollars elsewhere. Smart move, right? Wrong. Pepsi’s market share shrank, falling behind Coke and Diet Coke in the cola wars. It’s no surprise that they’re back at the Super Bowl this year.

Woody Allen once said, “Ninety percent of success is showing up.” Sometimes it’s just about being there, especially if your rivals are there too. Sometimes it’s a matter of reassuring your audience that you haven’t vanished, particularly in a volatile economy when many businesses are here today and gone tomorrow. For instance, I’ve been a member of BNI (Business Networking International) for many years now. I don’t collect referrals at every weekly meeting, but even if I never got any referrals it would still be worth my while to keep showing up, giving referrals to others, talking with other business owners and staying connected to my business team. If I suddenly disappeared from the scene, it would be all too easy for the others to assume that I had gone out of business. Even if they didn’t make that assumption, my image would inevitably fade from their minds. I’d be pulling a Pepsi.

So keep showing up. Keep blogging. Keep refreshing your web content. Keep producing those videos, fine-tuning your SEO and all the other things you do to refresh our memories. Keep your marketing alive, and stay ahead of the game.

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Why You Should Have an Editorial Calendar http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/01/22/why-you-should-have-an-editorial-calendar/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/01/22/why-you-should-have-an-editorial-calendar/#comments Mon, 23 Jan 2012 03:40:27 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=598 You’re too busy to create your marketing content yourself, so you sub that task out to a freelance copywriter. Problem solved, right? Well, up to a point. Your copywriter can work wonders to keep your blog posts, newsletter articles and other content fresh and up to date — but have you told him what you want far enough ahead of time to ensure that it gets done? It’s all too easy to bury yourself in other work and assume that your writer is fulfilling assignments you never assigned. Then one February 14th you sit bolt upright with the horrified realization that you forgot to request that special Valentine’s Day article.

If you’re familiar with this particular chill down the spine, then you probably need an editorial calendar. List your anticipated needs for content over the coming months or quarters, and then distribute that list among your marketing professionals. Your creative folks will always know which assignments are coming up and when, and you’ll have eliminated the “Oops, I forget to tell you” factor on your end.

In fact, it’s smart to have multi-stage editorial calendars for collaborative pieces such as direct mail postcards or newsletters, with separate schedules for idea submission, graphic design, copywriting, revision and publication. The whole project then comes together with Swiss-watch precision, and your team can roll right onto the next job. For example, a mortgage firm sent me a 12-month editorial calendar in January that showed me quite clearly what marketing pieces I’d be writing come December. As a result, we had a year’s worth of email blasts and direct mail postcards ready to go before Spring had sprung.

Of course there will be times when you need to respond quickly to current events. But that’s okay. You don’t have to give your freelancers license to bull ahead with a year’s worth of stuff. Just ask them to keep an eye on the upcoming month or quarter with a “subject to change” disclaimer. It’s much easier to change something that exists than something that doesn’t, and if you have no editorial calendar in place everyone’s just operating on the fly. This can hurt you if your freelancers are non-exclusive, because without prior knowledge they may be working on another gig when you need them.

If you’re a marketing firm ghost-blogging for multiple clients, then you face another obvious challenge. How can you prepare articles months in advance if you can’t always get your clients to send you the necessary background information in a timely manner? Here’s where you hedge your bets by adding alternate titles to the mix — pre-approved, evergreen topics that you can always fall back on. As publication time draws near, if you can’t get the intake on time, go to Plan B. Your copywriter composes the alternate title, you post it on time, and everybody’s happy.

Editorial calendars can make the difference between a last-minute scramble and a calm, smooth ride for your marketing campaign. Create yours today — and then assign the writing to me!

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Why I Have No Idea What You’re Saying http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/01/08/why-i-have-no-idea-what-youre-saying/ http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/2012/01/08/why-i-have-no-idea-what-youre-saying/#comments Mon, 09 Jan 2012 05:11:42 +0000 William Reynolds http://reynoldswriting.com/blog/?p=595 Have you ever chatted with a professional in a different line of work from yours and walked away wishing you’d brought a translator to the table with you? You’re pretty sure it was English — at least, the little words sounded familiar. But 90 percent of it somehow managed to whoosh right over your head. Are you stupid? Do you have a hearing problem? Or have you simply been buzzed by wall-to-wall buzzwords?

We all fall into jargon from time to time. It exists for a reason, and it can be highly useful or even necessary among those in the know. Car buffs debate issues involving torque and fuel ratios, composers pepper their language with Italian musical phrases, electricians casually drop terms such as “resistance” and “capacitor,” and physicists no doubt talk like time-traveling refugees from Star Trek: the Next Generation. It’s only natural for people in the same profession to talk shop. The problem comes when the engineer or the musician or the IT expert suddenly has to speak to a general audience. We’re listening, but we just don’t understand. And after a few minutes of not understanding, we’re no longer listening either.

The problem isn’t limited to industry-specific terminology, either. I’m often asked to rewrite or edit content written by people who work in a more general business field, and I still have to spend half the project time figuring out what the heck these folks are trying to say. A lot of it tends toward the nebulous, stuff about “aligning verticals and utilizing granular compartmentalization to achieve a more impactful synergy,” yadda yadda yadda. Business-speak is a way for people to talk a lot without saying much. But if you’re trying to sell yourself or your product/service to a mainstream audience, don’t be shocked if you’re rewarded by the sound of crickets chirping.

As a first step in clearing up your verbiage, try to avoid jargony words that ordinary language can handle perfectly well, such as “agreeance” (agreement) and “incentivize” (spur, motivate). And watch out for whiz-bang phrases that describe something that isn’t really that amazing, such as “results-oriented.” (You’d never guess how many business professionals think it a huge feather in their caps to describe themselves or their company as “result-oriented.” As opposed to what, “sitting-around-doing-nothing-oriented?”) “Full-service” is another phrase I’ve attacked on this blog before. (Ever hear a company describe itself as “partial service?”) Finally, don’t overuse the relatively simple, easy-to-understand buzzwords just because they aren’t as likely to whoosh us — for instance, not everything has to be a “driver” for something else. (I see that one a lot too.) Get a thesaurus and give another word or two a chance. We’ve got lots of them.

If you’re not sure you can veer away from industry lingo, or you can’t tell how accessible your stuff is to your intended audience, get a professional copywriter or copyeditor to go over it for you. You may get a revised version that makes you exclaim, “Oh, so that’s what I was saying!”

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